In general, I quite like it. The notion's good, the feeling of kind of...almost forced happiness is good, makes you wonder how much is going on beneath the surface. I'm not certain about the exclamation points at the end, though. I understand the idea behind them, I think, but I think there could be a more sophisticated way of expressing it, perhaps with a single word rather than using the punctuation? Feasibly, you could even write 'Exclamation Point.' if you wanted to add a bit of dry humour in there. Could be though, that you like it that way, and if so, I totally respect that.
It's good work ^^

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Searching my heart for it's true sorrow
This is what I find to be:
That I am weary of words and people
Sick of the city, wanting the sea.

Not sure what I was doing for like, the second half of it. At that point I was just feeling like !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so I wrote that. I'm gonna edit this one.

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join #ALLourLOVE a gay, straight, and anywhere in between alliance

*laughs* And I totally get that^^ It is good to just emotion-write something sometimes and to hell with over-analysing it XD

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Searching my heart for it's true sorrow
This is what I find to be:
That I am weary of words and people
Sick of the city, wanting the sea.